Maudlin scenes from " Please Be Real"

Where Are You?
by : NP



INT. Nigel’s Car.Night
Nigel pulls outside of a girl’s house. They are sharing a passionate kiss whilst “Weak” is playing in the background.
Nigel
(blushing)
I walk you in if you want.. only if you want though.
Girl
(smiling)
There’s nothing id like more.

Nigel walks around the car and opens her door.
Girl
(Innocently)
Hey, I have a pool, I know it's a little late, but I was thinking, that maybe you wanna take a swim?
Nigel
(Confused)
Um, yeah sure. Im up for that I guess(laughs)

EXT. Girl's pool. Night
Girl
(With fixed look at the sky)
I just love coming out here and looking at the stars. It's a reminder that no matter how much Evil there is on this earth, no matter how bad things get. All you have to do is look up to find beauty.
Nigel
(Perplexed)
Yeah... I never thought of it that way, but you know something?
Girl
What?
Whenever I need to see something beautiful, I can just look at you.
Nigel and the girl are seen sitting on the floor side by side by her backyard pool. he reaches to hold her hand. She then leans over to kiss him. He closes his eyes, but after a few seconds he opens his eyes and sees nothing but the bright light from a flashlight being held by an angry middle aged white man whose wife is seen standing in the door of the back patio.
Nigel
(awkwardly)
Hello, its a beautiful night isn't it?

                  “ Where Are You” is shown on a black screen as "maple sizzurp" by awkward steez begins to play. Opening Theme: Nigel is seen in his car driving around various parts of town. He is seen walking out of a gas station copping squares and as he walks out is captivated by a beautiful young woman, he shakes his head and gets back in his car. Next he exits a liquor store with a bottle of whiskey, he sees another stunning woman and is and is mesmerized but he then again disregards it. He is finally seen entering his driveway, then sitting on his bed sparking his cigarette, opening his liquor, and lies back.

 Ext. Field. Afternoon
A montage of Nigel and the nigga are shown as Hate Me Now- Chief Keef. The viewer sees Nigel’s ascent from fearful of the outcome of this fight to actually eager after getting pumped up from music and less than adequate exercise. The camera is at a still  and we see Nigel and the nigga approach each other.However, it actually seems that Nigel may actually hold his own against the nigga, but as soon as Chief Keef says “Damn” Nigel gets slept, and everyone subsequently rather quickly disperses and speak in indecipherable personal conversations. He is left alone in the mud all by himself, but he gets up a little and is surprised to see The Girl still there smiling in his face and examine his wounds

I wrote this at night. One out of many

I don't know if I'll come back to this

Ext.Park.Night 

Tina

(Wondrously ) 

Why did you put yourself in this place. It didn't have to be like this. You built the confounds you bound yourself to, Jason. 

Jason 

It's not that easy. I have no substance any girl would want. I'm a waste. I knew that. I built these confounds not imprison me, but to free me. 

Tina

You're fucking me right? 

Jason 

(Dismissively) 

No, no 

Tina

What the fuck do you mean then? No substance? You have a everything a girl would want, Jason you know that. You're in the Forbes list for Christ's sake. 

Jason 

(Excitedly) 

Exactly! I have every thing  a girl would want. You're right. I do have money. I do have status. Shit, I can even make a few things happen, but that's not substance. 

Tina

How is that not substance. You're crazy 

Jason 

Without those material things I am once again nothing. No girl could like me for me. I'm not even saying it on a derogatory way. I'm near deranged... On an intrinsic level I'm not likable... Incompatible. I'm not mad I just accepted it. No girl should want me. My legacy is what you see now. A few plaques and an estate. I acknowledge that. 

Tina

I don't think you see what I see.

Jason 

No, I do, and that's the thing you don't get. 

Raquel begins to speak , but her phone starts  to ring. Her face lights up 

Tina 

Oh shit, gotta go. It's Michael. He's taking me out for dinner. 

Jason 

(With a mild yet troubled face) 

Oh that's nice. Have fun!

Tina

(While backing away trying to catch a taxi)

Believe me I will, ps, we need to finish this conversation.

Jason is left on the park bench alone. In house produced music plays as he is seen getting up to walk away. The shot gets dimmer and dimmer till the screen is black 

Jason walks around the city by his lonesome. He walks into different stores just because . 

Scene from Sick Love

EXT.HER APARTMENT. NOON 

A one shot. The beginning of the dialogue takes place in the hallway. We see Tyler and the setting. The camera freely moves when necessary, but mainly is fixed on the side of Tyler's face.

Tyler 

(Increasingly aggressively ) 

Babe I'm sorry,

Her 

(Worried) 

Leave now, just go. 

Tyler 

Do you hear yourself? Open the door.. You know I'm sorry. 

Her 

Just leave. You're always fucking sorry Tyler. I told you I was through. 

Tyler 

I'm trying to be civil here . I fucking defend you. I stick My fucking ass out for you... I was fucking detained and you pull this? 

Her 

(Increasingly unnerved) 

Leave! I told you I'm done. I'm sorry. Please! If you love me just leave. 

Tyler 

If I love you just.. Do you hear yourself in there? Fucking open the door before I break it. You know I will 

Her 

(Aggressively) 

I swear if you break the door. 

Tyler 

Laughingly 

Oh so you're dating me now. Alright. Stand back 

For the first time in the scene the camera is in Her apartment. She is sitting on the couch and the shot is from behind her head towards the door 

Her 

(Frantic)

Please stop it! Please. 

(Tyler is heard breaking the door little by little.) 

Stop! What did I do . 

Tyler 

What am I doing wrong? You dared me. 

The door finally breaks open 

Her 

(Crying) 

Noo! You're gonna get me kicked out Tyler! What did I do?  

Tyler 

What you dared me to. You don't let me in, then you throw some streetcar named desire type shit at me? You act like you don't me

(She cries some more) 

Oh cmon stop it. You know I'll fix it 

He sits on the couch vainly trying to console her then we see a young man come from around the corner of the apartment room. 

Young man 

(Concerned) 

You alright? He touch you? 

Tyler

Who is this? Already? You fucking whore! 

Young man 

Who the fuck are you? Call her a whore and I fucking swear.. 

Tyler 

(As he walks towards him) 

You swear what 

Her 

Stop It! Greg you need to leave, now. 

Tyler 

( with a menacing yet blank stare) 

Oh don't do that. Stay the night. You see if he leaves I'm gonna bash his fuckin head in the pavement... You know I will... And that's just an inconvenience for everyone. I get jail time, ya little faggot friend loses his life, and most importantly: you lose another boy toy. Yeah another one. 

He looks to Greg who is seemingly frightened in his eyes. 

Yeah another... She do the thing with the two hands yet?( motions "jerking" movement) yeah it's awesome I know. 

Her 

(enraged) 

Leave! 

Tyler begins to leave and sees a love letter to Greg written by her 

Tyler 

(disgustingly) 

Really? A fuckin love letter? 

He walks out of the the now broken doorway and rips the letter. The camera shows Greg walking towards Her and reached for her hand as the scene changes

Something else you all

Dean goes to a Party: Camera follows Dean to his locker from his car.[ the camera angle shows the Back of Dean's Head from the neck up. Fellow students an be shown in this shot.] Dean puts books in his locker. As he closes the locker [as now the angle is inside the locker] there's a fast forward to Dean talking to his few friends at lunch.

INT.CAFETERIA.-NOON

   

[at a circular table,the camera angle is in the middle of the table and focuses at one person at a time: the speaker]

                       NICK

                (while laughing)

Forreal, though you need to come outside yo dusty ass room for once.

                       CHRIS

                      (seriously)

Aye, you know there's a Kappa Party this weekend? You should step out.  

                         DEAN

                (with a blank expression)

Why would I do that ,

                     CHRIS  & NICK

                      (collectively say)

Cuz there's Big Booty Hoes.  

                INT. DEAN'S HOUSE. AFTERNOON

                          DEAN

(walking past his grandmother in the den, with a blank expression )

I'm going to the Party.

                       EXT. GYMNASIUM. NIGHT

The camera pans to Dean as he stands in line somewhat impatiently,looking anxious, as he seems to expect something to go wrong. He walks to the admission bouncer, hands him fifteen dollars[ two 5's and five 1's]. He walks in and  as he enters a generic BOOTY CLAPPIN song turns on and everyone loses there mind.Immediately NICK[in the company of Chris] notices DEAN.

                        NICK

                 (with a smile on his face)

Aye Nigga, I see you showed up

                       CHRIS  

                     ( Also smiling)

Aye, Turn up.  

                       DEAN

                      (seemingly tired)

Yeah, I didnt have anything Better to do, So i said shit, i might as well step out.

                        NICK

    ( seeming done with the small talk conversation)

Well I'm about to get these hoes, i'll talk to you later bruh.

                        CHRIS

                      ( agreeingly)

yeah, me too.

Dean wanders aimlessly through the gymnasium, as urban youths dance with and on each other. As Dean is walking he runs into Lance, Jared, Mark, Thomas

                          Lance

                    (as if he's seen a ghost)

Nigga, How the fuck do you come to a Kappa Party, with a fucked up ass lineup like that?

                       Thomas

Ya, mama wrong for lettin you come out like that

          They all laugh collectively

                   Mark

               ( while laughing)

He got that three three three

                  JARED

three haircuts, for three dollars,  and three ring worm.

           They all laugh collectively

                     Thomas

            ( while pointing at him)

Nigga why are you even here. You dont get no bitches, no hoes, you lame as FUCK and yo line up look like it been sippin on lean nigga, foreal

Dean proceeds to say something, but before he can mutter a word they all yell  

     JARED, Lance,Thomas, AND Mark

          ( all talkingover each other)

Nah nigga dont say shit until you get that fixed.

Now with all hopes of a decent evening lost, he makes his way to a sofa, with two couples on opposite sides of the sofa kissing leaving the middle open for Dean to sit. Before he gets there, two  FAT girls approach him.

                    FAT GIRLS

Wanna dance ?

                     DEAN

               ( respectively declines)

Nah, I'm fine

                    FAT GIRLS

                   ( angrily)

Bitch ass nigga, prolly couldnt handle it anyways. Prolly a faggotnigga.

Dean makes his way to  the sofa  and pulls his marlboros out and begins to smoke as a slow song begins to play. Dean looks at the camera and  DEAN| LOSER comes on screen and fades to black

I have to perfect my HTML coding skills before I make my own website. This must do for now

Dean witnesses a convenience store robbery:
                  EXT.Dean's House.Afternoon
The camera[about fifteen yards  away from the front door] focuses on Dean exiting his house, with an intent look on his face.He puts his earphones in and begins to walk. Te camera follows Dean[ from behind his head] out of his subdivision. As he walks down a narrow street the camera follows him  parallel.We begin to hear a clip from the Corey Holcomb 5150 Show[ seemingly this is what is playing in his earphones.

                 EXT.Shopping Strip. Afternoon
The camera now faces Dean as he approaches the strip. He then takes one earphone out and opens the door to the convenience store.  .

       INT.INSIDE CONVENIENCE STORE. AFTERNOON

The camera follows Dean through all different angles as he wanders through the store. He gets a Mandarin Jarritos and some sour patch kids. While there he sees a friend,Hank, and approaches him.  

                         DEAN
                        (unsure)
Hank?
                          HANK
                       (gleefully)
Hey whats up, what are you doing here?
                        DEAN
Oh, nothing just getting a few things, havent seen you in awhile,
                           HANK
You know I dropped out right, figured I wouldnt need any of that shit anyway,
                        DEAN
True, i feel the exact same way.. what are you doing now
                         HANK
UH, a few friends of mine helped me get on my feet, Prolly make more than those bum ass teachers,.. tried to talk downto me and shit. You dont need high school, you dont need college, you dont need none of that shit to make it now in this world. As long as you got ya mind right[ he points to his head] and are willing to get it by any means, you gon be straight.
                         DEAN
                   (almost perplexed)
Uh yeah, I agree a hundred percent, shits real

                        HANK
                      (curiously)
Yeah, Yeah, how long you think you gonna be in here?
                        DEAN
Oh not long, I was actually about to leave, but I'll get in touch later.
                        HANK
                  (seemingly in a rush)
Aight cool,.. well i'll talk to you later
Dean then proceeds to walk toward the check out line. The camera follows different people from all different angles.The camera[ behind a grocery shelf] focuses on HANK and few other YOUTHS.
                        HANK
                        (concerned)
Do we have to do it now, I mean, i got a friend in here
                           Youth #1
                            ( annoyed)
Well tell that nigga to get down or get the fuck out.
                           HANK
Aight.
The camera faces Dean[ about five yards back]and gunshots are heard. Hank and the other YOUTHS approach the front of the store, each carring a gun.
                            YOUTH #2
Alright everybody get the FUCK down and you wont get hurt.
YOUTH #1 and YOUTH #2 approach the cash register as Hank watches the store patrons. The CLERK lady is on the ground, cowered behind the register.
                             YOUTH #1
Get the Fuck up and get the fuckin money out of the register.
                        CLERK LADY
                        (crying)
You dont have to do this, plea..
                          YOUTH #2
Shut the fuck up and do what he says
While Hank and the YOUTHs are preoccupied with the clerk and patrons, a man with a hand gun tries to sneak from behind a shelf and get the upper hand on one of the YOUTHs. YOUTH #2 notices and shoots him in the chest. The camera[above him] focuses on him as blood gurgles from his mouth and he dies slowly.
                        HANK
                    ( almost in tears)
What the fuck man, you didnt say we were gonna kill somebody.
                     YOUTH#2
He tried to be a fuckin hero, so we had to make an example.
 The Clerk[ now balling] quickly hands YOUTH #1 the rest of the money.Meanwile, Dean gets off the floor and opens his Jarritos and begins to drink
                         CLERK
                        ( Crying angrily)
Get out, haven't you done enough.
                       YOUTH #2
You ready?
                         YOUTH #1 (CONT'D)
Yeah, ayye you.
                       He looks at Hank
We're leaving.
                       Hank begins to slowly walk towards the Youths who are now towards the exit, and as he leaves he looks at Dean, who is by now the only one standing and Dean gives him a nod. Hank and the Youths leave and Dean puts a Five dollar bill[ for the Jarritos and sour patchkids] and walk out as if nothing happened.
                   INT.DEAN'S BEDROOM. NIGHT
Dean enters his room[ seemingly in night clothes] and rests on the bed sitting. He pulls out a g- pen and begins to smoke. He turns on the t.v and goes to his favorites list, he scrolls down swiftly and presses the OK button. It's the news. The news goes on commercial but not before it announces the next story
                        NEWS ANCHOR
Coming up three young men are held in custody after robbing a local convenience store.
The screen shows Hank and the Youths and Dean turns off the T.V and lies on his back . The screen fades to black. and one lone FUCK is Heard.